Candy land.

There once lived four quads named Jessie, Jasmine, Jack and Jacob. They loved sticking up for each other even if they were endangered. One Day they were of to candyland the theme park. So off they started walking. When they all got there they were so amazed. The first ride they went on was the candy rollercoaster it was made out of lollipops and chocolate. Then when they were riding it they all got stuck because the rollercoaster was broken.

Then Jessie started a combustion and said, “ what are we going to do I don’t want to be stuck up here my whole life” Then Jacob replied, “ I don’t know sis lets ask the others and see what they say”. “ don’t ask me cried Jasmine” Then Jack replied “ I can get us out of this just eat the rollercoaster till we get to the ground. “ thats a great idea Jasmine and Jacob replied”. “ I know”. So they started eating.

They finally got to the bottom and were happy and safe. They all hugged each other and went on different rides. They were having so much fun going on the rides. Then they saw the candy land lollipop man wearing his lollipop costume. They were so excited. They even saw the frost princes, the candy king and the peppermint butler.

Then there day was finished and they had to go home. They had a very fun day and enjoyed the rides. The end :)

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